Tuesday 13 August 2019

Quick write #1

Every week we do four or less quick writes about various things. Our first quick write this week is a base sentence and we have to write six different base sentences.



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  1. Anonymous15 August 2019 at 12:59

    Hi Carlos, I like how you wrote your first quickwrite, I knew exactly what image you were talking about. I think you should add more punctuation like ,'(). What did you do next?
    (:Robbie

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  2. Anonymous15 August 2019 at 13:19

    Hi Carlos,
    I like how you used a lot of adjectives to describe what the jaguar was doing. Maybe you could improve this quick write by adding a picture in so we could see what you're describing
    from Avie.

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